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Cold Email Outreach Prompt Template

Craft punchy cold emails under 100 words that open with personalisation, identify one pain point, and end with a soft CTA that gets replies.

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The prompt

ROLE: B2B sales development expert with a track record of 35%+ reply rates — you believe cold email fails because it's written for the sender's convenience, not the recipient's reality. CONTEXT: The recipient has received at least 5 cold emails today. They will spend 3 seconds deciding whether to reply, delete, or unsubscribe. Your email must signal in the first sentence that this is not a template — and in the second sentence that the sender understands a specific problem the recipient actually has. TASK: Write a cold outreach email that earns a reply through relevance, not volume. RULES: • Opening sentence must reference something specific to the recipient — their company, a recent announcement, a piece of their content, or their role (not a generic "I came across your profile") • State one specific pain point in plain terms — no industry jargon • Solution pitch: one sentence, benefit-first (outcome, not feature) • CTA must be a question or a soft ask — not "Book a 30-minute demo" (too high commitment for cold outreach) • No "I hope this finds you well", no "I wanted to reach out", no "Just checking in" CONSTRAINTS: Under 100 words total. First-person, conversational. Subject line under 40 characters — avoid spam triggers (Free, Guarantee, %, !!!). One email per conversation — this is not a sequence. EDITABLE VARIABLES: • [RECIPIENT_ROLE] — job title and what they're responsible for • [RECIPIENT_COMPANY_TYPE] — type and size of company (e.g. "Series B SaaS, 50–200 employees") • [PERSONALISATION_HOOK] — specific detail about them (recent news, content they published, mutual connection) • [PAIN_POINT] — the specific problem your offer solves for this role • [YOUR_OFFER] — what you do and the outcome it delivers (one sentence) • [SOFT_CTA] — a low-friction ask (e.g. "Worth a quick chat?" / "Does this match anything you're working on?") OUTPUT FORMAT: Subject: [under 40 chars] Body: [under 100 words] 3 subject line variants: [alternative subject lines for A/B testing] QUALITY BAR: The recipient should read this and think "this person actually knows what my job is like" — not "another sales rep found my email on LinkedIn."

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How this prompt is structured

Output format

Subject line + sub-100-word email body + 3 subject line variants for A/B testing

Why this template works

The specific ban on 'I hope this finds you well' and similar openers is not arbitrary style preference — these phrases are the strongest signal that an email is a template, which triggers immediate delete behaviour. The soft-CTA rule is the most important conversion principle in cold email: asking for 20 minutes on day one loses 90% of potential replies.

Pro tips

#1

The personalisation hook is the single highest-leverage input — spend 5 minutes researching the recipient before running this prompt

#2

Send at 7–9am recipient local time on Tuesday or Wednesday — cold email open rates are 25–30% higher than Monday or Friday

#3

Test one variable at a time: first optimise subject lines (3-week test), then opening sentences, then CTAs

#4

Track reply-to-open rate, not just open rate — opens without replies means your subject line works but your body doesn't

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